Teenage crush!

You feel you’re trembling,

You hear your heart’s mumbling,

As you hear or see “the person” around,

A silence sets in shy and profound.

For that special one, reasons unsaid,

Your lips don’t, your eyes talk instead.

A mixed feeling- both tense and delight,

It makes you happy ,crazy and elite.

Hush! Go slow, Do not rush.

Enjoy the bliss of teenage crush.

PS: 1. Blatantly copied the last 2 lines from somewhere! 🙂

2. Sushma’s parody of “DESI GIRL” rocks! 😀

3. Looks like Kangna’s hairstyle in  “FASHION”  is the in-thing now!…courtesy:- Kodali Divya. 😉

4. Written upon readers’ demand!

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9 thoughts on “Teenage crush!

  1. 2nd poem by a batch mate on the same day. nice! Liked this line the most

    “For that special one, reasons unsaid,
    Your lips don’t, your eyes talk instead.”

    Why don’t all of us budding poets get together for a poetry reading session sometime? Maybe sometime after the placements.

  2. @ Ambati Kalyan

    Nuvveamanna Arya anukuntunnaavaa baabuu !! pellavvabotunna vaallani lepukupodaaniki ! ( oka saari ninnu hero gaa petti Arya cinema chuusesaa neeku telikundaa. sry yee 😛 )

    paddu matter antee … aame thoo rakhi kattinchukovalani trying kaadu kadaa !! 😉

    >> rohit’s

    >> >> feelings ni baga capture chesav experience tone raasav ani ardam aindi.. kaadante oppukonu…

    yeah !! kaadante nenu kuuda oppukonu 🙂

  3. best till date..
    feelings ni baga capture chesav experience tone raasav ani ardam aindi.. kaadante oppukonu… ee maata kaamaata.. last 2 lines keka unnayi 😛

    btw lips meeda oka sigguto koodina smile vastadi danni kooda ekkadanna irikinchi unte baa undedi.. 😉

    @ambati.. neeku ladies nundi help dorakadam leda… shavva.. bhoomi antam aipovadam ledu kada suma…

  4. exactly Anu 🙂 loved the line “A silence sets in shy and profound”… the feeling is awesome 😉
    the narration is simply superb!!! you putforth all those teenage feelings right out thr :).. keep writing…

  5. very good rhythm … migata vatilo kanna deentlo rhyming bavundi, words correct ga place ayyay 🙂

    @Ambati : moham paguluddi ra baava saale! neekeppudo cheppa kada bey, malli malli doori potav! hannaa!! aa parody nee meede nanta, a token of ladies[1] contribution for ambati bhajans.

    [1] AFAIK, sisters’ contrib! note apostrophe on the left of s.

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