Not every body knows how it feels like
Pain cant be told aloud,
It hides in one’s self just alike,
Rain held in a black cloud.
One who’s expected to make you smile,
becomes the reason for your grief!
As you feel the break of something fragile,
you find you are dying and theres no relief.
The time of regret finally arrives,
You wish the meet happened never.
For it is pure sorrow this meeting derives,
Brush your teeth properly,Dont go to a dentist ever!
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Random questions| Do you believe that love is forever?: | Yeah, I do:) |
| Do you get hurt by people easily?: | Yeah,very often! |
| Do you believe that all people are generally good?: | Yeah. |
| Do mean people make you sad?: | sometimes. |
| Does ice cream make you happy?: | Yes if weighing machines did not exist. |
| Do you sing in the shower?: | Sometimes |
| When it rains, do you like to splash in the puddles?: | Yeah. |
| If you see a cute guy/girl walk down the street, do you smile and tell him/her that he/she is cute?: | No! |
| Do you notice when people have beautiful eyes?: | Yeah! |
| Have you ever cried watching a movie?: | Many times:) |
| Is it cute when old people are holding hands?: | Yeah,absolutely. |
| Are you a happy person?: | yeah. |
| Do you tend not to worry even when you know something bad is about to happen?: | No |
| Is it fine to cut the barbie's hair?: | Not really! Depends. |
| Have you ever laughed so hard that your stomach hurt?: | Yeah! |
| Are you slightly lazy?: | More than slightly. |
| Do you like to drive with the windows down?: | Yeah! |
| Are you in love?: | :) |
23 responses so far ↓
mythalez // September 9, 2008 at 7:02 pm |
rofl !!
…. just the kind of poem i like 
awesome twist
Himank // September 9, 2008 at 7:47 pm |
When I opened your blog… thought wudnt comment just read it.. But the poem forced me to comment..
Really nice!!!
thelazydan // September 9, 2008 at 7:54 pm |
I don’t understand how that came from during the mid-sems….
Its a good poem.
Phani Chaitanya // September 9, 2008 at 8:39 pm |
huuuu , fantastic and no more words [:)] !!. nice one !!!!!
bomi // September 9, 2008 at 9:59 pm |
Wow, this is a nice read, it’s playful and wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing it
rohit // September 10, 2008 at 3:13 am |
lolllzzz…
beautiful…
Rohith // September 10, 2008 at 4:27 am |
I know that pain
)
Devansh Mittal // September 10, 2008 at 4:31 am |
When I started reading it, I thought my comment on it would be long, but after the twist in the end, this is what I am left with.
Nice one!
Amused Observer // September 10, 2008 at 4:32 am |
Just can’t help my urge to appreciate this one, even though I’m no fan of poetry! Well written.
@nks // September 10, 2008 at 5:27 am |
he he he …grr88 as always …
Yogesh Nautiyal // September 10, 2008 at 5:46 am |
gud one.
It reminded me of an old poem, that I read back in school, and it read like..”the pain which is both physical and metal is dental …..”.
I don’t rem the author name.
Yogesh Nautiyal // September 10, 2008 at 5:52 am |
*mental
aniket // September 10, 2008 at 6:05 am |
rofl @ Devansh.
Vaise even I was gonna advise you to let go of some of the rhyme, but I guess in this and Namrata’s latest kind of poems, rhyme is required.
Good one. Send some of yours to the mag na?
mythalez // September 10, 2008 at 6:15 am |
@yogesh, that poem about “visit to the dentist” is by Ogden Nash
Gopal // September 10, 2008 at 6:22 am |
true! dentists are hard to forget creatures, I remember that dentist who burshed my tooth with a metal brush!!
Prateek G V // September 10, 2008 at 6:24 am |
hehe
wah! kya twist tha 
bharatambati // September 10, 2008 at 6:41 am |
twist 2much vundi.
small but awesome one…
Devansh Mittal // September 10, 2008 at 6:42 am |
@Gopal: Lol @ “burshed my tooth with a metal brush!!”
Namrata // September 10, 2008 at 1:05 pm |
Super sweet!! The ending was great.
Deepti // September 11, 2008 at 4:57 am |
Navatha // September 12, 2008 at 12:26 pm |
rofl da =)) awesome one…
Abhishek // September 12, 2008 at 12:30 pm |
I agree with Himank… it’s a wonderful piece of work, fantastic. I wish I could rhyme my feelings, ideas and emotions like this…
@Yogesh: The poet’s name is Ogden Nash
samuels // September 12, 2008 at 1:30 pm |
read the 1st stanza , thought abt it in usual context , went 4 da comments and one of them mentioned abt da twist
, so i read it fully , nice one 