A shy and timid girl was I,
when I got into a new world.
Bold and confident I am,
Perfectly reverse,my character swirled.
Sensitive I was,
And tears to wet my cheeks,
Sensible now I am,
I haven’t cried since many weeks!
Poor is a man with no money,
Poorer is a one with no character,
Poorest is the one with no friends,
And I always wanted to be the richest however life wends.
Loadz of friends I started to make,
some true and some fake,
All are an addiction,
Be in any number,they are not an obsession.
Started to Love people,
Thanks to her who taught me how to,
Love is to give whatever you have and be humble,
Its all about how one soul can be equal to two.
A-new-pama is the one I never dreamt of before,
Here I stop to pen her though there is lots more.
19 responses so far ↓
Spurthi // May 16, 2007 at 5:32 pm |
Bhale rasave..
chala bavundi
Namrata // May 16, 2007 at 5:49 pm |
Amazingly written especially the title and the last 2 lines.You have a real talent girl.Poetry is difficult to pull off – its not just about rhyming and all but you were direct dil se and it was a very nice read.Keep blogging!!
Anu // May 16, 2007 at 6:00 pm |
Well,
I confess I haven’t framed the title on my own.
Its somebody else’s great mind:)
chinni // May 16, 2007 at 6:29 pm |
nice poem.but my fren forgot to mention the drastic change in her language.how she began to use some cute sweet words
sushma // May 16, 2007 at 6:31 pm |
Gud that u have changed da!
hope all goes well for u!
keep blogging!
Lydia // May 16, 2007 at 6:40 pm |
Hey Anups!!!!!u rock re…I wanna put u anew name apart from Anups since…u r a little cute poetess of our GH. I hope u’ll come up with many poems like this cute one, honey[:)]
Deepti // May 18, 2007 at 6:55 am |
Cheers to an amazing budding poetess!!!Loved your post!!Waise who is that girl about whom you mentioned ??
kamal... // May 20, 2007 at 10:38 am |
every time i skipped to comment reading all u r before blogs…due 2 my laziness……but this one made me active enough 2 write a comment………………….
kummesaavu…….really u ve a looooooooooootttttttttttttt …..
wats the secret of u r poetry……. and of course this change……….
kamal... // May 20, 2007 at 10:40 am |
a new anupama ………of couurse……….
keep it going……
phani chaitanya // May 28, 2007 at 7:00 am |
well written … post straight away from your heart !!!!!!!!
. poetry is
nice to see that one my friends was a poetess
something from ones heart and what one feels and its not just the matter of framing and rhyming the words.
Keep Blogging !!!!!!!!!!!
spandana // May 28, 2007 at 5:44 pm |
hey anu rocking vunde poem….
even Iam asking this question who is behind your poetry? U need a inspiration for the poetry …newyas its very nice…
keep blogging..
supercrazybhanu // June 12, 2007 at 9:50 am |
Gr8 poem miss ‘pama’ has good rythm in it also so do u write poetry often if yes would like to read a few more …..
druva // June 26, 2007 at 3:28 pm |
chala bavundi anu ………..keep it going
Vee // May 21, 2008 at 8:13 am |
tht was a nice one.
anupama // May 21, 2008 at 11:42 am |
@Vee
Thanks a lot!
Please do look into other poems as well..Hope u like them
Vee // May 22, 2008 at 5:05 am |
yeah sure, I will
rohit // January 8, 2009 at 2:15 am |
enti nijame
Sri // April 5, 2009 at 6:07 am |
I just love the poor poorer poorest one….chala bagundi…..keep going…manchi senti vundi
rockon!!!
mohan // May 20, 2009 at 6:34 pm |
i dont understand wts the meaning of “pama” ?